Hey Bloggies!
For literacy in the past couple of weeks, we have been writing children's books. we took inspiration from other writers like Lynley dodd and dr Seuss to come up with our own storyline and characters. after we came up with our idea, we started to form a script for the story. m story was about a character called many the monkey who gets stuck up a tree with his friends and they have to figure out how to get down safely.
Here's my story:
This is manny the monkey
Manny lives deep in the Amazon rainforest with his mum in a little tree hut.
Manny runs into the middle of the trees that he plays in and his friends are waiting for him there.
They played around in the low trees for a bit.
Manny decided he wanted to try something new and dangerous, so he climbs the tall tree.
“How are you going to get down?” asked his friends “I don’t know!” answered manny “Look out!”
“RAWRRRRRR” yells the gorilla. “AHHHHHHH” yells gemma, the first one of mannys many friends
as she scurries up the tree.
“HISSSSSSSSSS” says the snake. “AHHHHHHH” screams Greg, another one of mannys many
friends as he sprints up the tree, joining the other two.
“GRRRRRRRRR” growls the dog. “AHHHHHHHHH” yell millie and George, who are the last of
mannys many friends, as they scamper up the tree together.
“Oh no!” said manny. “How are we going to get down from this tall tree?”
“How about we make a monkey chain and climb down the tree together” said gemma
“Great idea!” said manny and they started to look for a strong branch to hang off
“I found a strong branch!” yelled George
“Let’s start our chain now” said millie
“Greg should go first” decided manny. “He’s the strongest monkey here!”
“Great idea manny” said gemma as Greg started to hang from the branch.
“I’ll go next!” yelled gemma. “Then me!” squeaked George “Me next!” said milie excitedly. “I’ll go at
the end” laughed manny as he climbed over to the end of the chain.
“Let’s swing from this branch to the next tree so we can get down safely” said Greg. “Great idea!”
said the rest of them at the same time.
“3, 2, 1 GO!” they yelled together and swung to the tree.
“now we can easily drop down” said millie
They all dropped down from the tree together.
“We did it!” yelled manny.
“Goodbye!” they all said to each other as they started to run back home
I hope you enjoyed my story.
See ya later!
See ya later!
Hey Pippster,
ReplyDeleteYour story looks really cool, I like how your title sounds catchy.
Maybe next time you could put a DlO in your blog post.
Why did you choose the name Manny, How long did it take you.
Hi Shelbster! Thank you so much for your comment. I tried to put the book in as an ebook for my DLO but it wouldn't let me upload it so i just put the script. Maybe next time i'll put a picture of the cover for my DLO.
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