Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, March 3, 2020
My Sestina | NZ writing
For literacy we wrote sestinas. we are doing this for an NZ writing thing where we do a whole bunch of writing projects and send them to another school and they send theirs to us.
Here is mine!
The on the spot grocery shop
The long boring car ride
Family squished inside of the car
Cotton candy rained down
going to the marlborough sounds
The burger was the most delicious
We are sending these to Fairfield intermediate school in Hamilton.
See ya soon!
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Pippa!
ReplyDeleteThis is a really cool post!
What inspired you to make your Sestina?
Maybe next time you could dd what a Sestina is and why you did it.
I really love your poem!
~Pandora uwu